Taken

On this piece i rewrote the cause and affect piece on a new book and whole different topic. I am trying to work on introduction in this
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The characters Charity(Daughter), Albert(Servant), Patience(Friend), Victoria(Maid) got into a bit of trouble on the day April 3, 2032 in Highland, Florida. The Highland was more like a prison than a neighborhood. All the rich people lived there to get away from normal lives. They each had guards who followed them around all the time. It was a terrible life  but Charity couldn't complain. Then one day she was kidnapped. From this point on in this story we talk from the eyes of Charity for the whole story. Right now it is her vs The kidnappers. Which is Person vs Person.


They say you have 24 hours during a kidnapping for them not to kill you. They taught her to stay calm and cooperate  The only reason she was there is because her dad is very rich and a very famous person. She hated it to, she thought to herself why couldn't i have a normal life with real friends. But she new the answer. Charity was brought to a room and told to sit there for a while with some water. They have all the money setup for the exchange but something goes wrong. The bring charity out and her dad is supposed to be flying  a helicopter  to bring the money but he hit a power line because he's drunk and crashes. 

Charity is just devasted. She cant believe her eyes, her dad was gone. Nobody said a word they got all sad they said to her this wasn't supposed to happen. But then the leader of the plan stepped forward and said "Yes it was", he took off a mask and it was her father! She was so confused. He told her the whole story. The whole kidnapping crew was his dads friends and he did it because he hated how he lived in the highlands with his wife he needed to go. He told her she had a choice to go away to mexico with him. Whta do you think she picked.

That's right to go to Mexico.